Thursday, June 28, 2012

Colleague Critique "Yousef"

From viewing the first picture it obvious to notice the stop-motion in this picture as you view it from left to right.  It is also easy to see the real nature of busy city area in downtown San Antonio giving the importance of the yellow taxi cab. His high depth of field shows great detail through the entire photo with a very crisp clear shot with the picture on the left not so much on the right. I feel he could have gotten better clarity on the man on the side of the picture than having some blur around his frame and face.   However, the sequencing in the picture is very nice, I believe it shows the reaction of the cab driver picking up a customer, it is very presumable. Maybe if he also would have captured the entire light posts on both pics without cutting them off it would have given a better scene shot I think.

The second shot in this pic is also very good just needs a better exposure on the second picture I feel its a bit overexposed in the picture it does show her in blur motion given her moving state and still frame its a good choice for blur motion the picture with her in stop motion gives a very clear defined photo while the other doesn't quite give the same impression it possibly could have been a better shot if the exposures were correct. It also shows like a good spy-eye sort of picture from like behind a tree I like that. It doesn't really show me much in composition as far as a meaning to the picture but I still would say ok on the motion part.

Third picture also has very good motion and sequencing very understandable almost identical in shot.  I feel its very well exposed very nice focus and detail throughout the entire image it shows the pedestrian waling almost step buy step. It shows just a normal day on a busy street as well as tourists and workers head to wherever they are going.  It could have shown a better emphasis on something more appealing but its still a rather well taken photo of some action going on.

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